高考英語(yǔ)文字書面表達(dá)講評(píng)教案3

高考英語(yǔ)文字書面表達(dá)講評(píng)教案 最近你班舉行了一場(chǎng)關(guān)于“動(dòng)物園里籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物好不好”的討論。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)將討論的結(jié)果向某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿，并陳述你的觀點(diǎn)（至少發(fā)揮一條）。注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。 贊成的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 1、有機(jī)會(huì)親眼目睹野生動(dòng)物;2、有助于培養(yǎng)對(duì)動(dòng)物和自然的愛;3、能保護(hù)動(dòng)物免于野生環(huán)境的危險(xiǎn). 反對(duì)的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 1、浪費(fèi)人力物力;2、破壞生態(tài)平衡;3、動(dòng)物失去自由。 你的觀點(diǎn) …… Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 一、提煉要點(diǎn) 第一節(jié)：很多同學(xué)贊成動(dòng)物園籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物。（他們認(rèn)為這樣）（人們就）有機(jī)會(huì)親眼目睹野生動(dòng)物，這有助于培養(yǎng)（人們）對(duì)動(dòng)物和自然的愛；（同時(shí)，）（籠養(yǎng)）還能保護(hù)動(dòng)物免于野生環(huán)境的危險(xiǎn)。 第二節(jié)：（相反地）很多也同學(xué)不贊成動(dòng)物園籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物。（他們認(rèn)為）籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物浪費(fèi)人力物力，破壞生態(tài)平衡。同時(shí)，動(dòng)物也失去自由。 第三節(jié)：在我看來(lái)，籠養(yǎng)野生動(dòng)物是錯(cuò)誤的，為了保證他們健康成長(zhǎng)和生態(tài)平衡，應(yīng)該釋放所有野生動(dòng)物。 二、靈活表達(dá)要點(diǎn) 第一節(jié) 1.很多同學(xué)贊成動(dòng)物園籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物: ①M(fèi)any students in our class support the idea that animals can be kept in zoos. ②Many students in our class agree that zoos can keep some wild animals. ③Some of the students in our class think it (is) a good idea to keep animals in zoos. 2.（他們認(rèn)為這樣就）有機(jī)會(huì)親眼目睹野生動(dòng)物： ①They argue that they will have the opportunity to see wild animals if (they are) kept in zoos. ②They think that if animals are kept in zoos, they can go and have a clear look at them. ③They believe that only in this way, can they watch wild animals easily, clearly and safely. 3.這有助于培養(yǎng)（人們）對(duì)動(dòng)物和自然的熱愛。 ①It helps (to) increase people’s love for animals and nature if they see wild animals in zoos. ②Taking a look at wild animals can increase people’s love for animals and nature. ③It is good for people to see animals in zoos, because they can develop a further understanding of animals and nature. 4.（籠養(yǎng)）還能保護(hù)動(dòng)物免于野生環(huán)境的危險(xiǎn) ①Wild animals can be protected from dangers in the wild. ②Wild animals can be prevented from being endangered if they are kept in zoos. ③Animals kept in zoos can get away from the dangers in the wild. 第二節(jié) 1.很多也同學(xué)不贊成動(dòng)物園籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物: ①Other students are against the idea about keeping animals in zoos. ②Other students think it (is) no good keeping animals in zoos. ③The rest of the students have a totally different attitude towards the idea. 2.他們認(rèn)為:籠養(yǎng)動(dòng)物浪費(fèi)人力物力，破壞生態(tài)平衡: ①They think (that) it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos and that it will damage the balance of nature. ②They argue (that) keeping animals in zoos is a waste of money and, worse still, will have a negative effect on the balance of nature. ③They believe that it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos, which will also do harm to the balance of nature. 3.同時(shí)/另外，動(dòng)物也失去自由: ①At the same time, animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos. ②Besides, animals will have no freedom when kept in zoos. ③In addition, animals will be deprived of freedom when living in zoos. 第三節(jié) 在我看來(lái)，籠養(yǎng)野生動(dòng)物是錯(cuò)誤的，應(yīng)該釋放所有野生動(dòng)物, 以保證生態(tài)平衡。 ①In my opinion, it is wrong to keep animals in zoos. All animals should be set free so as to keep the balance of nature. ②Personally speaking, I insist that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos and that animals (should) be set free to keep the balance of nature. ③I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keep them locked up. I suggest the animals (should) be set free to keep the balance of nature. 三、添加連詞，連段成篇 Dear editor,   I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. Those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals. It might also develop people’s love for animals and nature. Besides, animals in zoos can be protected from dangers in the wild.   However, those who are against the idea think that it’s a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos. It’ll also damage the balance of nature. Animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos.   I personally feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keep them locked up.   Yours sincerely,    Li Hua

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