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2007 年12月真題
Directions : For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese :
1.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越廣泛的應(yīng)用
2.例如數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對人們工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活的影響
Digital Age
With the development of economy,digital products such as computers, cameras, MP3s, and mobile phones have wound their way into most people’s daily life. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion (93.5 percent) of people in China have once got in touch with certain kind of digital products.
Digital products greatly facilitate our life. With the help of con^uters, we may even deal with our work at home,enjoying music at the same time. With digital cameras, we may take photos to our hearts9 content, keeping happy occasions as a permanent memory. With digital TV programs, it is convenient for us to watch programs at any time we like.
However, digital products also bring about negative effect. Some people are getting too dependent on digital products and almost becoming slaves of it, being unable to calm down to study or work without wearing their MP4s and mobile phones at hand. (156 詞)
“一句話”點評
很顯然,第一段的數(shù)據(jù)和CCTV抓住了閱卷老師的眼球。同時 使用了 conduct, a high proportion of 和 get in touch with 等好詞和短 語,無疑為文章增加了亮點。
快捷構(gòu)思
第一段:描述現(xiàn)象,弓I人該段中心“如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越 廣泛的應(yīng)用”。而后“一句話”數(shù)例為具體現(xiàn)象展示。
第二段:開門見山展現(xiàn)段落中心“數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對人們丁 作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活的影響”,并舉電腦、數(shù)碼相機和數(shù)碼 電視的例子來支持該中心
第三段:直接提出數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的不良影響,并展現(xiàn)逐層遞進的 結(jié)果來支持。
美麗詞句
1.wind one’s way into 闖入,進人
2.facilitate使便利,使變得容易(亮點詞,相當(dāng)于短語make easy)
3.With the help of computers,we may even deal with our work at home, enjoying music at the same time. With digital cameras, we may take photos to our hearts,content,keeping happy occasions as a permanent memory. With digital TV programs, it is convenient for us to watch whatever programs at any time we like.(并列關(guān)系的三個排比句子準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)了數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品對 人們生活和工作的影響。deal with處理;to one’s hearts’ content 讓人滿意的;keep happy occasions存留快樂的時刻。)
4.bring about 產(chǎn)生,導(dǎo)致
5.calm down保持鎮(zhèn)靜